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One of the pros of online communication is that you can easily make friends from different countries. Even in this globalized world it is sometime hard to find foreigners who can become friends unless you are a college student or a businessman at an international company. That’s why online communication makes the barrier low. The biggest cons in online communication is that you can’t easily find long lasting friends online. I have met several people online. At first we were good friends, sending messages back and forth all day and every day. But as the time goes, the frequency of messages decreases and the relationship ends.
Feb 5, 2022 12:35 PM
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One of the pros of online communication is that you can easily make friends from different countries. Even in this globalized world it is sometimes hard to find foreigners who can become friends unless you are a college student or a businessman at an international company. That’s why online communication takes this barrier away. The biggest cons in online communication is that you can’t easily find long lasting friends online. I have met several people online. At first we were good friends, sending messages back and forth all day, every day, but as the time goes, the frequency of the messaging decreases and the relationship fizzles out.
Excellent structure, good detail and a high level of accuracy! Only made a few changes to make it sound more natural. :)
Feb 5, 2022 2:54 PM
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