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Just yesterday...Because my dad took me to our old house to fetch something that we will use,he hurried there and asked I to carry a lot of things.They are really heavy and it's so far.I was very sad,I cried aloud. (I am only 15,so my English is not good.Please don't laugh at me.If I make mistakes,please point them out,thanks)
Feb 5, 2022 9:01 PM
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Just yesterday, because my dad took me to our old house to get something we need to use. He was in a hurry and asked me to carry a lot of things. They were really heavy and it was so far away. I was very sad, and I cried aloud. (I am only 15, so my English is not good. Please don't laugh at me. If I make mistakes, please point them out. Thanks.)
Your English is pretty good! I'm sorry it was sad to go back to your old house.
Feb 5, 2022 9:18 PM
Just yesterday...Because my dad took me to our old house to fetch something that we will use,he hurried there and asked me to carry a lot of things.They were really heavy and it was so far.I was very sad,I cried aloud. (I am only 15,so my English is not good.Please don't laugh at me.If I make mistakes,please point them out,thanks)
Feb 5, 2022 9:15 PM
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