Amit
Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? COULD YOU PLEASE CORRECT ME IT IF I MAKE ANY MISTAKES? At the statement, a few numbers of positive outcomes can be addressed. To begin with, one thing that makes life easier for immigrants is that universal acceptance of English. This knowledge is more enough to survive in a foreign country. Even in country like China, Japan or Russia where English is not spoken widely. It is still possible to find people who can read, write and speak it reasonably well. If we hear a new language regularly or all the time, our brain will automatically pick it up. For this reason, learning a foreign language in a foreign country is actually easier than learning it while we are still in our country. Apart from this, using their own languages in a foreign county could be a bright side for a migrant. Many organization and company they sometimes need foreigners who speak their own language and it can lead to a successful career for migrants. As I see it without knowing a foreign language makes no difference because they can experience their knowledge in the job fields which can make them more experienced. Similarly, by travelling, they can make a broader view of other cultures and feel the beauty of multicultural; also, it can help to acclimate to a variety of work environments. In addition, technology makes everything easier. If someone doesn’t know the language of the country where they live, they can still find restaurants by searching online and get simple directions through Google maps. They can even order food online without having to use another language at all. If they need to communicate with someone who does not speak their language, they can simply use Google translate to convey a message effectively.
Feb 28, 2021 6:11 PM
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? COULD YOU PLEASE CORRECT ME IT IF I MAKE ANY MISTAKES? From the statement, a few positive outcomes can be addressed. To begin with, one thing that makes life easier for immigrants is the universal acceptance of English. This knowledge is more enough to survive in a foreign country. Even in country like China, Japan or Russia where English is not spoken widely, it is still possible to find people who can read, write and speak it reasonably well. If we hear a new language regularly or all the time, our brain will automatically pick it up. For this reason, learning a foreign language in a foreign country is actually easier than learning it while we are still in our country. Apart from this, using their own languages in a foreign county could be a bright side for a migrant. Many organizations and companies sometimes need foreigners who speak their own language and it can lead to a successful career for migrants. As I see it not knowing a foreign language makes no difference because they can use their knowledge in the job fields in which they have experience. Similarly, by travelling, they can get a broader view of other cultures and feel the beauty of multiculturalism; also, it can help to acclimatise to a variety of work environments. In addition, technology makes everything easier. If someone doesn’t know the language of the country where they live, they can still find restaurants by searching online and get simple directions through Google maps. They can even order food online without having to use another language at all. If they need to communicate with someone who does not speak their language, they can simply use Google translate to convey a message effectively.
This has some very good language and ideas. Unfortunately it has no organisation and does not answer the question properly. You MUST use paragraphs. You MUST have an introduction that rewords the question and gives your opinion. You MUST have a conclusion which restates your opinion. I suggest you look at at some good example essays to see what you need to do. Some of this is excellent, but the lack of organisation will reduce the score.
February 28, 2021
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