Ningxi Zhang
Hi, please correct my mistakes! Thank you ;) Hi, this is Ningxi. I want to introduce myself to you. I am a student who’s taking remote classes because of the pandemic. I love watching movies, TV series and reading books. I always go to cinemas and musical theaters. I’ll share some of my comments on those works from an amateur’s angle in the future. Among all genres of works, science fiction is the best to me, and dystopia is even better. Thank you for your time!
Apr 2, 2021 4:38 AM
Comments · 4
Fantastic writing! The only thing I’d change is instead of saying “among all genres of works,” I’d make it simpler and say “My favorite genres are science fiction and dystopia.” Amazing work! I’m impressed! 💪🏻
Apr 3, 2021 3:32 AM
Hi Ninxi, your text is great, here are some suggestions to make the text flow even better ☺️ Hi, this is Ningxi. I want to introduce myself to you. I am a student who’s taking remote classes because of the pandemic. I love watching movies, TV series and reading books. I always [often?] go to the cinema [singular - otherwise you can say the movies] and musical theaters. I’ll share some of my comments on those works [on those works sounds a bit strange, you could say: on my favourite works or on some movies and plays,...?] from an amateur’s angle [point of view] in the future. Among all [the different] genres, science fiction is the best to me [I like Science Fiction best], and dystopia is even better.
Apr 2, 2021 3:42 PM
Ningxi Zhang
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
Learning Language
English