Mandy
Q: How long do you think you could go without using your smartphone? Except working time, I guess I can't do anything without a smartphone. I use the smartphone instead of the watch to check the time, use google map to guide destination, use the camera to take a photo to record everything, use learn app to study English and so on. I rely on many applications with my smartphone in daily life, but I didn't often use social media. Because I think this makes people obsessed to waste time.
Sep 29, 2021 12:06 PM
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Q: How long do you think you could go without using your smartphone? Except during working time/working hours, I guess I can't do anything without a smartphone. I use the smartphone instead of a watch to check the time, I use google maps to guide me to my destination, I use the camera to take a photo to record everything, I use a learning app to study English and so on. I rely on many applications on my smartphone in daily life, but I didn't often use social media because I think this makes people obsessed with wasting time.
Hi Mandy, this is a good writing exercise attempt. I just have two comments: 1) You cannot omit "I" in your list. This is not a bulleted list in which you are explaining common use cases for a smartphone or making imperative statements. 2) Are you saying that you didn't use social media in the past? Or you don't use social media in the present because it's a waste of time? Hope this helps! Happy writing and happy learning!
Sep 29, 2021 12:34 PM
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Mandy
Language Skills
Chinese (Taiwanese), English, Japanese
Learning Language
English