Anto Ci
I think there are many risk that the children that are not trained about it can met online. The cyberbulling is one that in the last years is having a big impact. It’s footprint is remarkable. Guys that are victim of bully. That are menaced, threaten by them. We have to tackle this action. How? Not be afraid, but talking with your parents, don’t worry if he will keep this behavior. There will be the time when he will end. But another thing os to be together, to create groups in order to keep out them. Because sometimes it’s like that make you different. But they are different.
Sep 29, 2021 2:52 PM
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I think there are many risks that children are not trained about when going online. Cyberbullying is one that in recent years is having a big impact. Its footprint is remarkable. Children that are victims of cyberbullying are menaced. We have to take action. How? Not by being afraid, but by talking with parents, and not worrying if he will keep this behavior (? Not sure what you mean here). There will be a time when it will end. Another thing is to be together, to create groups in order to keep [bullies out??]. [Because sometimes it’s like that make you different. But they are different.] ??
One main thing is to clarify the pronouns (this, them, it, etc...) that you're using. It's a little confusing trying to follow your ideas because you're not using more specific wording. Also, we use 'the' as an article in front of a noun when we're talking about a specific noun. For example, since you're talking about children in general, we don't need to add 'the' in front of 'children' - same goes with 'cyberbullying'. I know I made a lot of corrections, so please let me know if you have any questions! (:
Sep 29, 2021 11:23 PM
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Anto Ci
Language Skills
English, Italian
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English