Rina
Can you correct my text? I wrote my answer for same question as other position today. Q. Scholarships should be offered primarily on the basis of financial need, rather than on academic achievement. Agree or disagree with this statement and give concrete examples to support your answer. My answer from disagree position↓ I disagree with the idea that scholarships should be offered primarily based on financial need, rather than academic achievement. There are two reasons for this : attracting talented applicants and motivating students to work harder. To begin, a school can attract more talented students if it grants scholarships based on academic achievement rather than financial need . Talented students would raise other student's enthusiasm for everything.It's a nice effects for school. Second, it is good way to offer scholarships based on academic achievement in order to motivate students to work harder. For these reasons, I disagree with the idea. While it may be nice idea that scholarships should be offered primarily on the basis of financial need, I think way of offering scholarships on academic achievement has many good effects for students and schools. October 2nd Sat. 2021
Oct 2, 2021 2:19 PM
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Can you correct my text? I wrote my answer for same question as other position today. Q. Scholarships should be offered primarily on the basis of financial need, rather than on academic achievement. Agree or disagree with this statement and give concrete examples to support your answer. My answer comes from a contradictory stance. ↓ I disagree with the idea that scholarships should be offered primarily based on financial need rather than academic achievement. There are two reasons for this; attracting talented applicants and motivating students to work harder. To begin, a school can attract more talented students if it grants scholarships based on academic achievement rather than financial need. Talented students could raise other students’ enthusiasm. It has a nice (positive) benefit for the school. Second, it is a good way to offer scholarships based on academic achievement in order to motivate students to work harder. For these reasons, I disagree with the idea. While it may be a nice idea that scholarships should be offered primarily on the basis of financial need, I think offering scholarships based on academic achievement has many good effects for students and schools. October 2nd Sat. 2021 I disagree with the stance that granting scholarships should be based on financial need rather than academic achievement. There are two reasons for this; attracting talented applicants and motivating students to work harder. Firstly, schools can attract academically proficient students who can raise other students enthusiasm for learning. This can have a positive impact on the school’s learning environment. Next, offering scholarships based on academic achievement can encourage students to exert more effort. While it may be commendable to provide scholarships based on financial need, I believe it is more favourable to offer scholarships on the basis of academic performance.
Oct 2, 2021 3:58 PM
Can you correct my text? I wrote my answer for same question as other position today. Q. Scholarships should be offered primarily on the basis of financial need, rather than on academic achievement. Agree or disagree with this statement and give concrete examples to support your answer. My answer from disagree position↓ I disagree with the idea that scholarships should be offered primarily based on financial need, rather than academic achievement. There are two reasons for this: attracting talented applicants and motivating students to work harder. To begin, a school can attract more talented students if it grants scholarships based on academic achievement rather than financial need. Talented students would raise other student's enthusiasm for everything. It's has good benefits for the school. Secondly, it is good to offer scholarships based on academic achievement in order to motivate students to work harder. For these reasons, I disagree with the idea. While it may be a nice idea for scholarships to be offered primarily on the basis of financial need, I think that offering scholarships on academic achievement has many benefits for students and schools. October 2nd Sat. 2021
Great writing!
Oct 2, 2021 2:37 PM
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Rina
Language Skills
English, Japanese
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English