Leo3600
I have never think that, but now I think that is posible, just a person who has a lot of money, can do that. I think that is the own think that you need because you need a car, suit, a place which he can be safe and when everything would be and to get it you need money. But that could be a bad idea to become Batman because you would have a lot of power and noone will know what are your purpuses and if you wanna fight with the crime by yourself you will have problems with the police and the government. If you just want it like a adorn it will be a waste of money.
Oct 5, 2021 11:48 AM
Corrections · 6
I have never thought about that before, but now I think that it is possible. Only a person who has a lot of money can do that. I think that is the main thing (I think you originally wanted to say “one thing,” but since you later list a few things that you need, what you’re really trying to say is that money is the MAIN thing. From money, you can buy all of these things.) that you need. You will need a car, suit, a safe place, and you can get it with money. But it can be a bad idea to become Batman because you would have a lot of power and no one will know what is your purpose. And if you want to (Wanna is technically not a word but is often used when speaking casually. The more grammatically correct way to say it is want to.) fight crime by yourself, you will have problems with the police and government. If you just want it [like a adorn], (I’m not sure what you mean here, but I think you’re talking about prestige. Adorn is a verb that kind of means to decorate or make more beautiful. It is often used to talk about fancy jewelry, clothing, or artworks and is not usually used to talk about someone’s reputation.) it will be a waste of money. I like how creative you got with this post. I think the main thing that you want to focus on when writing is your run-on sentences. Since some sentences are too long, it can be hard to understand what you mean. You can practice fixing your run-on sentences by reviewing sentence structure.
I hope my corrections made sense. Let me know if you need me to explain anything!
Oct 5, 2021 12:09 PM
I have never thought of that, but now I think that is possible. A person who has a lot of money can do that. I think that is the only thing you need because to buy a car, a suit and a place, which you can be safe and put everything you need, you must have money. But it could be a bad idea to become Batman because you will have a lot of power and no one will know what you intend to do with them. If you wanna fight crime all by yourself, you will have problems with the police and the government. If you just want it to be an adorn, it will be a waste of money.
Oct 5, 2021 12:11 PM
I have never thought of that, but now I think that is posible, just a person who has a lot of money, can do that. I think that is the only thing that you need because you need a car, suit, a place which he can be safe in and to have these you need money. But it could be a bad idea to become Batman because you would have a lot of power and no one will know what your purpose is and if you want to fight crime by yourself you will have problems with the police and the government. If you just want it to be adorn then it will be a waste of money.
Oct 5, 2021 12:08 PM
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Leo3600
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English, Spanish
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English