Kyi Sam Wai
Maybe the book how I try hard to be successful when I'm at my best-self. Actually, I have an awesome childhood. I was having so much fun at the time. I'm the country girl and when I was a child. I don't have so much stress about school. And I have a so much free time to play with my friends and I explore everyplace around my village. And I played new things all the time. I used to go swimming usually and we walked along the Fields and sometimes we went fishing at those fields. But after I moved to the city, my life has completely changed. I switched from the easy-going girl to serious girl about life. I worked hard to graduate from high schools with flying colours so that I can join a good university and get a good job. I have no clue what I would become in the future. But I'm still so ambitious even though I don't what I'm shooting for. This is my life till now.
Oct 5, 2021 4:35 PM
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Maybe the book how I try hard to be successful when I'm at my best-self. Actually, I had an awesome childhood. It was having so much fun at the time. I lived in the countryside when I was a child. I don't have too much stress about school, and I had a so much free time to play with my friends and I explore every place (everywhere) around my village, and I played new games all the time. I used to usually go swimming, and we walked by (or through) the Fields and sometimes we went fishing at the fields. However, after I moved to the city, my life completely changed. I switched from the easy-going girl to a serious girl about life. I worked hard to graduate from high school with flying colours so that I can join a good university and get a good job. I have no clue what I would become in the future. But I'm still so ambitious even though I don't what I'm shooting for. This is my life till now.
Really great!!! Some small suggested changes. Normally you don't start sentences with a but or and, so I changed them. But honestly- amazing effort! Much better then mine 👌
Oct 24, 2021 6:04 PM
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Kyi Sam Wai
Language Skills
Burmese, English
Learning Language
English