Rick Wu
“I have 3 years experience in develop. I like teamwork and communication. I writing flexible and clean code and using good architecture. I make good user experience app. I have been presentation in famous confluence. I share many post in my blog." How to improve this introduction? Thanks.
Oct 7, 2021 4:44 PM
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“I have 3 years experience in web-development and programming. I like teamwork and communication and pride myself on my flexible and efficient coding abilities. I also employ good design techniques and I am proficient in developing user-friendly apps. I have presented my work in various well-known conferences and I often share many interesting, technology-oriented posts in my blog." How to improve this introduction? Thanks. Hey Rick, I've added a fair amount of more academic sounding phrases to make your introduction more professional. Did you mean to say conference instead of confluence? If you need more assistance please just message me and I'll happily help you, I really enjoy proof reading CVs, cover letters and so on! Hope that helps, Nick 😊
October 7, 2021
“I have 3 years experience in development. I like teamwork and communication. I write flexible and clean code and use good architecture. I make great user experience apps. I have been presenting in a famous confluence. I share many posts on my blog." How to improve this introduction? Thanks.
I'm not exactly sure what this part means: "I have been presenting in a famous confluence", so I'm not sure if that is the best way to say it. I hope this helps though!
October 7, 2021
“I have 3 years of development experience. I like teamwork and communication. write flexible and clean code and use good architecture. I make a good user experience app. I was introduced to a famous confluence.I share a lot of posts on my blog. "How can you improve this introduction? Thanks.
October 7, 2021
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