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120_2110 Could you help me by correcting the text ? 【Mont Blanc /モンブラン】 “Mont Blanc” made from chestnuts is a popular cake especially at autumn in Japan. Along with autumn has come, various Mont Blanc cakes are displayed in shops. l’m wandering that the origin of Mont Blanc might be come from France or somewhere. Are there Mont Blanc cake in your country? Anyway, It was good. Photo by me
Oct 13, 2021 12:57 PM
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120_2110 Could you help me by correcting the text? 【Mont Blanc /モンブラン】 “Mont Blanc” cupcakes, made from chestnuts, are popular especially in autumn in Japan. When autumn arrives, various Mont Blanc cupcakes are displayed in shops. l wonder about the origin of Mont Blanc cupcakes. Are they from France or somewhere else? Are there Mont Blanc cupcakes in your country? Anyway, it was good. Photo by me
The photo you included shows what we call 'cupcakes' in the US. 'Cake' is usually not in a paper cup, but 'cupcakes' are. I hope this helps.
October 13, 2021
120_2110 Could you help in correcting this text ? 【Mont Blanc /モンブラン】 “Mont Blanc” which is made from chestnuts is a popular cake eaten in Japan especially in Autumn. During Autumn, a variety of Mont Blanc cakes are usually displayed in shops. l’m not sure of the origin of this cake . It may have originated from France or some other part of the world. Are there Mont Blanc cakes in your country? It tastes good by the way. Photo by me
You did well Tura San and your thought was easily conveyed. Keep practicing this way and you will keep getting better. Sayonara!
October 13, 2021
120_2110 Could you help me correct the following text? 【Mont Blanc /モンブラン】 “Mont Blanc”, made from chestnuts is a popular cake type, especially during autumn in Japan. Along with the coming of autumn, various Mont Blanc cakes are displayed in shops. I'm wondering if the origin of Mont Blanc can be traced to France or if it's somewhere else. Are there Mont Blanc cakes in your country? Anyway, the cake was good! Photo by me
Nice work, Tura. You made an effort to express yourself and that's good. Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections. I would like to help some more.
October 13, 2021
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