Barbara
I’m learning a new language, because I would like to trip in the future. I’m learning English. The english is one of the necessary languages of the world. There is one reason why I’m learning a new language. The studying a new language helps me to improve my brains and my horizons. I hope that i shall achieve my goal🙆🏼‍♀️😌
Oct 6, 2020 11:45 AM
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I’m learning a new language because I would like to take a trip in the future. I’m learning English. Today, it is necessary to know English. There is one reason why I’m learning a new language. Studying a new language helps me to improve my brain and my opportunities. I hope that I will achieve my goal.🙆🏼‍♀️😌
“Shall” is rarely used. I would avoid it. The names of languages are always capitalized as well as “I.” “English is one of the necessary languages of the world” sounds unnatural though it would be grammatically correct.
October 6, 2020
I’m learning a new language, because I would like to travel in the future. I’m learning English. The English language is one of the most important languages in the world. Here is another reason why I’m learning a new language: the studying of a new language helps me to increase my brain activity and broaden my horizons. I hope that I shall achieve my goal🙆🏼‍♀️😌
Good job, Barbara!
October 6, 2020
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Barbara
Language Skills
English, Russian
Learning Language
English