Taichi
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Oct. 10th I would like someone to correct my diary (or to tell me a more natural way of saying some of the things below. But I would be happy even if you JUST CORRECTED my entry). Here, I might write in spokenbEnglish, because I want to improve not just my writing skills, but also my speaking skills. Could do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Oct.10th It was kind of clear choice to ONE movie ever. What is the one? You guys might think so right now. Actually I watched the movie, This Is It earlier. Yes, it was two times to watch that, but watching this again has been a while since first time. This Is It got people all over the world exciting again and again, and of course I was one of them. Michael Jackson is a totally fantastic dance player and but also he has singer who have beautiful voice. Possibly I like the most the song “The Love You Save”, which is made by Jackson 5 though, because this song gets me encouraged. Of course I know, Bad and Billy Jean, Beat it won tons of seller over the world ever . However I like this song the most, as much as I always listen to this on the way to my office every day.
Oct 10, 2020 2:55 PM
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Oct. 10th I would like someone to correct my diary (or to tell me a more natural way of saying some of the things below. But I would be happy even if you JUST CORRECTED my entry). Here, I might write in spokenbEnglish, because I want to improve not just my writing skills, but also my speaking skills. Could do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Oct.10th It was kind of clear choice to ONE movie ever. What is the one? You guys might think so right now. Actually I watched the movie, This Is It earlier. Yes, it was two times to watch that, but watching this again has been a while since first time. This Is It got people all over the world exciting again and again, and of course I was one of them. Michael Jackson is a totally fantastic dance player and but also he has singer who have beautiful voice. Possibly I like the most the song “The Love You Save”, which is made by Jackson 5 though, because this song gets me encouraged. Of course I know, Bad and Billy Jean, Beat it won tons of seller over the world ever . However I like this song the most, as much as I always listen to this on the way to my office every day. REwriting; It was a clear choice for one favorite movie of all time. “What movie is it?”, you may be thinking. I just watched the movie, This is it for the second time. It has been a while since I saw this movie the first time. This is it got people all over the world excited, and of course I was one of them. Michael Jackson is a totally fantastic dancer and also he is a singer with a beautiful voice. I may like the song “The love you save” the most, which is made by Jackson 5, because it is so inspiring to me. Of course I know Bad, Billy Jean, and Beat it won tons of sales all over the world, but I like this song the most. So much so, that I listen to this on the way to my office every day.
November 16, 2020
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Oct. 10th I would like someone to correct my diary (or to tell me a more natural way of saying some of the things below. But I would be happy even if you JUST CORRECTED my entry). Here, I might write in spokenbEnglish, because I want to improve not just my writing skills, but also my speaking skills. Could do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Oct.10th: It was a clear choice for ONE favorite movie of all time. "What movie is it?", you may be thinking. I just watched the movie, This Is It for the second time. It has been a while since I saw this movie the first time. This Is It got people all over the world excited, and of course I was one of them. Michael Jackson is a totally fantastic dancer and also he is a singer with a beautiful voice. I may like the the song “The Love You Save” the most, which is made by Jackson 5, because it is so inspiring to me. Of course I know Bad, Billy Jean, and Beat It won tons of sales all over the world, but I like this song the most. So much so, that I listen to this on the way to my office every day.
October 10, 2020
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Taichi
Language Skills
English, Japanese
Learning Language
English