Molly
Today, I woke up early as I intended to. I feel so happy I did it! I have done quite a few things by waking up early. The weather is warmer today. I hope I can wake up early even in freezing days, too.
Jan 15, 2021 11:11 PM
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Today, I woke up early as I intended to. I feel so happy I did! I have done quite a few things by waking up early. The weather is warmer today. I hope I can wake up early even on colder days, too.
You did pretty good the first time around, your grammar was really good :), but I felt a few things were off in terms of word choice so I made a few corrections I felt would make it flow better
January 15, 2021
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Today, I woke up early as I intended to. I feel so happy I did it! I have done quite a few things by waking up early. The weather is warmer today. I hope I can wake up early even on freezing days, too.
Nice!!
January 16, 2021
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