I shot this picture last week in MUJI store, which is a Japanese brand, selling clothing, commodity, and food, etc. I don’t know what these clothing balls can be used, perhaps for decoration, or child

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I shot this picture last week in MUJI store, which is a Japanese brand, selling clothing, commodity, and food, etc. I don’t know what these clothing balls can be used, perhaps for decoration, or children play. I just saw that they were a harmonious combination of colors in the pool, like Spider-Man 🤣. How do you think of this picture? Guess that these balls use. I would love to see your feedback. Thanks.

Jan 16, 2021 2:58 AM

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I took this picture last week in a/the MUJI store--a Japanese brand--that sells clothing, household commodities, food, etc. I honestly don’t know what these clothing balls can be used for..., perhaps for decoration, or children's play? What attracted my eye was that overall, they were a harmonious combination of colors in the bin, yet, some of them stood out for being somewhat like the pattern of Spider-Man's costume 🤣. What do you think of this picture? Can you guess what these balls are used for? I would love to see your feedback. Thanks!

Hi, Summer. Good job! While using “shot” is not wrong, it is used more for fashion photography or of animals or scenic views, whereas we say an everyday picture is taken or took. Use “a store” if there are many of them and the setting is not particularly important, but use “the store” if it is the only one you are referring to and the display would be unique. Finally, try not to start three consecutive sentences with the same word--especially if that word is “I.” Yes, I agree, those do match the color scheme of his costume! Sorry, but other than a pin cushion or a pet’s toy, I have absolutely have no idea what they are used for. I hope that this helps you.

January 16, 2021

I took (1) this picture last week in a MUJI store, which is a Japanese brand that sells clothing, commodities, (2) food, etc. I don’t know what these clothing balls can be used for, perhaps (just) for decoration or children’s play. I just saw that they was a harmonious combination of colors in the pool, like the colors from Spider-Man 🤣. What (3) do you think of this picture? Guess that these balls are used for. I would love to see your feedback. Thanks.

1. Shot a movie; took a picture/video 2. Either use “and” at the end of a list, or “etc” but not both: a, b, and c OR a, b, c, etc. 3. How do you like this picture; what do you think of this picture

January 16, 2021

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