Masih/Speaking,TOEFL
Hello everyone. I usually go to bed at 10:30. Before going to bed, I enjoy watching a movie or a TV show. I surely brush my teeth and then I go to bed. I don't take a nap in the evening, so I fell asleep very soon and very well. Because I am really exhausted.
Jan 17, 2021 9:15 AM
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Hello everyone. I usually go to bed at 10:30. Before going to bed, I enjoy watching a movie or a TV show. I always brush my teeth and then go to bed. I don't take a nap in the evening, so I fall asleep very soon and sleep very well because I am always really exhausted.
Nice! Make sure you match the tenses. We tend not to use 'surely' unless there is some doubt about an action or describing specific actions which show affirmation. E.g. 'Surely you won't ...' or 'He nodded surely'. You also can't say that you fell asleep 'very well' because we view falling asleep as just going from awake to asleep; like flicking a switch. Therefore, it's not an action that can be done good or badly. Hope this helps! Keep up the great work! :)
January 17, 2021
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