meesh
when Depression hits as today, I used to look at my bracelet and say ”everything gonna goes well, Allah never let you alone ” then take a deep breath and go to sleep, this small piece of jewelry always remembers me how I was and how I become, It retains a lot of memories so for that it touches my heart
Dec 1, 2020 7:40 PM
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When depression hits, like today, I used to look at my bracelet and say, ”Everything is gonna go well. Allah never leaves you alone.” Then I take a deep breath and go to sleep. This small piece of jewelry always reminds me of how I was and how I have become. It holds a lot of memories, so for that it touches my heart.
Lovely story! I made a few corrections in case you would like to improve the passage's grammar and punctuation. But I understand exactly what you wanted to say. So, good job!
December 1, 2020
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