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I'm a primary school student, and this is my writing practice. A sunny day We go to the park every day, but today is a little bit different. Today, when we go out, Mum brings a mysterious box. This bow is very heavy. Mum says, "This box is too heavy, that is nearly breaking my arm." Then, we find some warm and hard rocks to sit. My sister sleeps on the biggest rock, and she looks very cozy. I am poorer than her, because Mum opens the big heavy box, and I see the typewriter is laying in the box. Mum wants me to write the diary in this such a nice sunny day! So, let's see the beautiful spring sight. Now, I will describe the pretty sight. The leaves turn to green bit by bit. The grass creep up to the sun. The flowers are still sleeping in the ground. The grass field is warm and soft when the sunshine is full on it. People take the heavy coat off, and go out to play in spring. Although it's a weekday, there are still a lot of people. I'm very pleasant that now is spring, because we could go out every day. But suddenly, I realized we will have school soon... Thank you very much.
Feb 24, 2021 2:02 PM
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I'm a primary school student, and this is my writing practice. A sunny day We go to the park every day, but today is a little bit different. Today, when we go out, Mum brings a mysterious box. This box is very heavy. Mum says, "This box is too heavy, it is nearly breaking my arm." Then, we find some warm and hard rocks to sit on. My sister sleeps on the biggest rock, and she looks very cozy. I am poorer than her, because Mum opens the big heavy box, and I see the typewriter is lying in the box. Mum wants me to write my diary on this such a nice sunny day! So, let's see the beautiful spring sight. Now, I will describe the pretty sight. The leaves turn to green bit by bit. The grass creeps up to the sun. The flowers are still sleeping in the ground. The grass field is warm and soft when the sunshine is full on it. People take their heavy coats off, and go out to play in spring. Although it's a weekday, there are still a lot of people. I'm very pleasant that now is spring, because we can go out every day. But suddenly, I realize we will have school soon... Thank you very much.
A great story! 非常好。好好学习天天向上!
February 24, 2021
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