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A conversation about Lunar New Year Hello you guys. Have a nice day!. Honestly, it's quite difficult for me to write a notebook about Lunar New Year because I have so many ideas so I can't arrange to make a complete one. Therefore, I wrote a conversation between me and my colleague at our office, as below: Min: Hey Liz, Lunar New Year is coming close to us. What have you prepared for this special occasion? Liz : I've cleaned up, as well as decorated my house with some kind of bonsai, Kumquat tree, and chrysanthemum. How about you? Min: Me too, I've made banh chung, which is a savory sticky rice cake with mung beans and pork. My mom also bought some boxes of season dried cashew and candied coconut. Liz: That sounds good!. I'll visit you on the first day of Lunar New Year and enjoy those cuisines. Min: Oh, I'm happy to hear that. Call me before you come. Thanks ****Please help me correct my conversation above and give me your advices to sound more natural. Thank you so much!
Feb 13, 2021 9:21 AM
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Here's a conversation about Lunar New Year Hello you guys. Hope you are having a nice day!. Honestly, it's quite difficult for me to write a notebook about Lunar New Year because I have so many ideas which makes it difficult for me to arrange to make a complete article. Therefore, I wrote a conversation between me and my colleague at our office, as below: Min: Hey Liz, Lunar New Year is fast approaching. What have you prepared for this special occasion? Liz : I've cleaned up, as well as decorated my house with some kind of bonsai, Kumquat tree, and chrysanthemum. How about you? Min: Me too, I've made banh chung, which is a savory sticky rice cake with mung beans and pork. My mom also bought some boxes of season dried cashew and candied coconut. Liz: That sounds good!. I'll visit you on the first day of the Lunar New Year and we can enjoy those cuisines. Min: Oh, I'm happy to hear that. Call me before you come. Thanks ****Please help me correct my conversation above and give me your advice for it to sound more natural. Thank you so much!
Well done - this is a lovely conversation and a great piece of writing.
April 9, 2021
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