Coco
It was a sunny and beautiful Valentine's day. I was visited my mum in the morning and went back home to prepare some special gifts for three lovely sisters. I love floral decoration and I like to helping people to design special presents to their beloved person. Due to the Eco-friendly concept. These are natural preserved flowers 🌹which are hand-picked and cut at the peak of blooming beauty, then delivered to the factory for further sorting, grading and finally processing. This preservation process allows the flowers 🌹to maintain their beauty, soft and delicate appearance for a long time around three to five years. Do you like flower? Who interest in preserved flower? Who want to practice English with me? Please feel free to add me as your friend and let's practice together! 🌹 #please correct my grammar #happy Valentine's day
Feb 14, 2021 2:05 PM
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It was a sunny and beautiful Valentine's Day. I was visited BY my mum in the morning and went back home to prepare some special gifts for three lovely sisters. I love floral decorationS and I like to helping people design special presents FOR their beloved person. ("loved ones" sounds more natural than "beloved person") Due to the Eco-friendly concept, these are natural preserved flowers 🌹which are hand-picked and cut at the peak of blooming beauty, then delivered to the factory for further sorting, grading, and finally processing. This preservation process allows the flowers 🌹to maintain their beautIFUL, soft and delicate appearance for a long time, around three to five years. Do you like flowerS? Who IS interestED in preserved flowerS? Who wantS to practice English with me? Please feel free to add me as your friend and let's practice together! 🌹 #please correct my grammar #happy Valentine's day
Great job! You described Valentine's Day very well with lots of details. I put my corrections in capital letters so they will be easy to find, but they would not normally be capitalized like that.
Feb 15, 2021 5:31 PM
It was a sunny and beautiful Valentine's day. I was visited my mum in the morning and went back home to prepare some special gifts for three lovely sisters. I love floral decoration and I like to helping people to design special presents to their beloved person. Due to the Eco-friendly concept. These are natural preserved flowers 🌹which are hand-picked and cut at the peak of blooming beauty, then delivered to the factory for further sorting, grading and finally processing. This preservation process allows the flowers 🌹to maintain their beauty, soft and delicate appearance for a long time around three to five years. Do you like flower? Who interest in preserved flower? Who want to practice English with me? Please feel free to add me as your friend and let's practice together! 🌹 #please correct my grammar #happy Valentine's day
How can l add you.l would like to make friend with you.l also want to practice my english.
Feb 14, 2021 3:04 PM
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Coco
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), Chinese (Cantonese), English
Learning Language
English