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Something I love to eat is pizza. Nowadays, there are so many varieties of pizza that you can feel overwhelmed trying to choose only one of them. I sometimes come across a pizza picture and it makes me feel hungry. But I think all of us who love pizza should be moderated and eat just a couple of slices. Too much pizza is not desirable even if we love it. I'd like to share what I consider the best pizza. So, it starts with a thin crust bread. Afterwards, it comes the universal toppings such as sauce and cheese. I like when it has an extra piece of cheese. Who doesn't like cheese-pull effect? Also onions and mushrooms because they would give a good taste. And last but not least chicken, pepperoni and ham. Okay that's it. I hope we can get over the current situation and can hit the road with our friends without wearing masks, with more hugs and more physical contact like those old days before the virus.
Feb 15, 2021 7:44 PM
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Something I love to eat is pizza. Nowadays, there are so many varieties of pizza that you can feel overwhelmed trying to choose only one of them. I sometimes come across a picture of pizza and it makes me feel hungry. I think all of us who love pizza should, however, moderate ourselves and eat just a couple of slices. Too much pizza is not good for us even if we love it. I'd like to share what I consider the best pizza. So, it starts with a thin crust. Afterwards, it comes the normal toppings such as sauce and cheese. I like when it has an extra piece of cheese. Who doesn't like cheese-pull effect? Also onions and mushrooms because they would give it a good taste. Last but not least chicken, pepperoni and ham. Okay that's it. I hope we can get over the current situation and can hit the road with our friends without wearing masks, with more hugs and more physical contact like those old days before the virus.
This was really good! I just corrected a few things to fit how we might say it in the United States. Happy to answer any questions you might have about my corrections.
February 15, 2021
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