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Please correct my sentences if you find any mistakes or if they sound unnatural. Today, I stayed at home mostly but I went out for a while. In the morning, I got up at 7:30. It was sunny so I did the laundry. After that I called my friend so that I would learn English from him. I went to a honor system stand to buy vegetables,talking to him but there was nothing to get. So I made lunch as soon as I got home. In the afternoon, I went to the acupuncture clinic. It takes 30 minutes to get there by car. The service is literally nice. It was totally refreshed. In the evening, I cooked hamburg steak for dinner. After that I had dinner with my husband. It was totally good. I just finished having dinner. I’m kind getting sleepy so I’m thinking if I take a bath. Anyways, I’m gonna go out with my parents.
Feb 16, 2021 10:44 AM
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Please correct my sentences if you find any mistakes or if they sound unnatural. Today, I stayed at home mostly but I went out for a while. In the morning, I got up at 7:30. It was sunny so I did the laundry. After that I called my friend so that I would learn English from him. I went to a honor system stand to buy vegetables,talking to him but there was nothing to get. So I made lunch as soon as I got home. In the afternoon, I went to the acupuncture clinic. It takes 30 minutes to get there by car. The service is really nice. It was totally refreshing. In the evening, I cooked a hamburger steak for dinner. After that I had dinner with my husband. It was so good. I just finished having dinner. I’m kind getting sleepy so I’m thinking of I taking a bath. Anyways, I’m gonna go out with my parents.
February 16, 2021
Please correct my sentences if you find any mistakes or if they sound unnatural. Today, I stayed at home mostly but I went out for a while. In the morning, I got up at 7:30. It was sunny so I did the laundry. After that I called my friend so that I would learn English from him. I went to a honor system stand to buy vegetables,talking to him but there was nothing to get. So I made lunch as soon as I got home. In the afternoon, I went to the acupuncture clinic. It takes 30 minutes to get there by car. The service is literally nice. It was totally refreshed. In the evening, I cooked hamburg steak for dinner. After that I had dinner with my husband. It was totally good. I just finished having dinner. I’m kind getting sleepy so I’m thinking if I take a bath. Anyways, I’m gonna go out with my parents. Hi Mao. The only comment I would make is about 'honor system stand'. This normally means a place where people leave things such as fruit or vegetables, and hope people are honest enough to leave money to pay for them. Is this what you mean?
February 16, 2021
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