Esther
Yesterday I had a short trip with my parents.We went to an ancient town which located on the edge of The Huanghe River. This ancient town has a long history. In Qing Dynasty, this ancient town was a important transport center in northern china and there are still many residents who live in here. We saw a variety of old buildings and most of them was made by stones. Many buildings on the hillside and the layout follows an chinese ancient science which called Feng Shui and the style of buildings are special but attractive.
Feb 17, 2021 2:30 PM
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Yesterday, I enjoyed a short trip with my parents. We went to an ancient town located on the edge of The Huanghe River. This ancient town has a long history. In Qing Dynasty, it was an important transport center in northern china and today there are still many residents living there. We saw a variety of old buildings, most of them were made by stones. The layout of the buildings on the hillside follows an ancient Chinese science called Feng Shui. The style of the buildings is special and attractive.
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Feb 17, 2021 4:08 PM
Yesterday I had a short trip with my parents.We went to an ancient town which located on the edge of The Huanghe River. This ancient town has a long history. In Qing Dynasty, this ancient town was a important transport center in northern china and there are still many residents who live in here. We saw a variety of old buildings and most of them was made by stones. Many buildings on the hillside and the layout follows an chinese ancient science which called Feng Shui and the style of buildings are special but attractive. Yesterday I took a short trip with my parents to the ancient town of ——-located on the Huanghe River. ( omit next sentence as unnecessary unless you want to write that this ancient town has a remarkable or unusual)
Feb 17, 2021 2:40 PM
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Esther
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
Learning Language
English