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Written Exercise 44 - We Should Avoid Staying Up Late! For some reasons,people stay up late into the night frequently. It is reported that staying up late chronically influences our health and even endangers our lives. As we know, the liver is one of our important organs. Which has the function of metabolic detoxification. If we keep staying up late chronically, our liver will be damaged. If our liver is damaged once, it can not be reverted again. If our liver could not be reverted, we would die. Although we know the truth well, we do not do as the healthy advice says.
Feb 18, 2021 8:21 AM
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Written Exercise 44 - We Should Avoid Staying Up Late! For some reason, people frequently stay up late into the night (or just - stay up late). It is reported that staying up late chronically influences our health and even endangers our lives. As we know, the liver is one of our important organs, which has the function of metabolic detoxification. If we keep staying up late, our liver will be chronically damaged. If our liver is damaged once, it can not be reverted again. (Or - Liver damage is irreversible and can lead to death) If our liver could not be reverted, we would die. Although we know the truth, we do not do as the health advice says. (or - we do not follow the health advice)
Does simply staying up late cause this problem? Or is it that often people stay up late and drink?
February 18, 2021
Written Exercise 44 - We Should Avoid Staying Up Late! For various reasons, people frequently stay up late into the night. It is reported that chronically staying up late influences our health and can even endanger our lives. As we know, the liver is one of our most important organs, which has the function of metabolic detoxification. If we chronically (keep chronically shouldn’t be said, it’s redundant) stay up late, our liver will become damaged. If our liver is damaged once, it can not be recuperated (or... Once our liver is damaged once, the damage is permanent.). If our liver can not be reverted, we would die. Although we may know the truth well, we do not do as the health advice says (we usually avoid saying “do not do”. An alternative would be... “Although we may know the truth well, we often do not obey health advice.”).
Good job, just a couple of small adjustments! 😅
February 18, 2021
Written Exercise 44 - We Should Avoid Staying Up Late! For some reasons,people stay up late into the night frequently. It is reported that staying up late chronically influences our health and even endangers our lives. As we know, the liver is one of our important organs. Which has the function of metabolic detoxification. If we keep staying up late chronically, our liver will be damaged. If our liver is damaged once, it can not be reverted again. If our liver could not be reverted, we would die and will be buried in the grave. And if you are Hindu, then you will be turned to ashes. Although we know the truth well, we do not do as the healthy advice says.
February 18, 2021
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