Hassan Rifau
It’s like the same morning today. I was waiting for my bus to come office. Unfortunately I was later one minute but the bus driver didn’t even look at me to wait for me. Therefore the whole day went wrong. Because of the one minute I missed my office meeting after that an interview. So today went full stressed.
Feb 18, 2021 12:49 PM
Corrections · 1
It’s like the same morning today. I was waiting for my bus to come office. Unfortunately I was later one minute but the bus driver didn’t even look at me to wait for me. Therefore the whole day went wrong. Because of the one minute I missed my office meeting after that an interview. So today went full stressed.
Hello, I just finished reading what happened to you and first of all, i’m really sorry that occurred. I just want to correct some mistakes you made while writing so that in the future you don’t make the same mistakes. In the fist sentence when you said “It’s like the same morning today” that wasn’t very specific, so, in the future, try to be more specific and write something like “My morning didn’t go as I planned today”. In the second sentence, you can omit the “office” and maybe replace “come” with “arrive”. I really liked the way you used therefore, and that whole sentence was grammatically correct. In the next sentence, when you say “because of the one minute” next time replace “the” with “that” so that your sentence is fully and grammatically correct. Lastly, in your last sentence replace the verb go with the verb to be, so, the sentence would go like “So today was...” and then change “full stressed” with “very stressful”. Hope this helped, if you have any doubt you can always message me and I will do my best to help you.
Feb 18, 2021 1:05 PM
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Hassan Rifau
Language Skills
English, Maldivian (Dhivehi)
Learning Language
English