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Written Exercise 45 - Healthy Advice We Should Take As we know, often staying up late and drinking can damage our liver chronically. Liver damage is irreversible and can lead to death. For protecting our liver and saving our lives, here is some healthy advice we should follow. 1. Try to drink less and less until quitting drinking. 2. Try to go to bed earlier than used to be. 3. Try to make reasonable daily plans and bedtime routine. 4. To execute the bedtime routine you make, mark down the result of enforcement and review it from time to time. 5. To tell your family that you are following some healthy advice and make them supervise you. 6. To ask yourself why you follow the healthy advice when you give up on it.
Feb 18, 2021 3:18 PM
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Written Exercise 45 - Healthy Advice We Should Take As we know, often staying up late and drinking can damage our liver chronically. Liver damage is irreversible and can lead to death. For protecting our livers and saving our lives, here is some healthy advice we should follow. 1. Try to drink less and less until quitting drinking. 2. Try to go to bed earlier than you used to. 3. Try to make reasonable daily plans and a bedtime routine. 4. To execute the bedtime routine you make, mark down the results of enforcement and review it from time to time. 5. Tell your family that you are following some healthy advice and make them supervise you. 6. Ask yourself why you follow the healthy advice when you give up on it.
I corrected numbers 5 and 6 because while they would work if the rest of the list was made up of fragments (It is important to: 1)go to bed early 2)stop drinking), the previous rules are complete sentences, so these two need to match.
February 19, 2021
Written Exercise 45 - Healthy Advice We Should Take As we know, often staying up late and drinking can damage our livers chronically. Liver damage is irreversible and can lead to death. To protecting our livers and save our lives, here is some health advice we should follow. 1. Try to drink less and less until quitting drinking. 2. Try to go to bed earlier than you used to. 3. Try to have a reasonable (maybe you mean 'regular' do the same thing every day) daily plan and bedtime routine. 4. To execute the bedtime routine you make, mark down the result of enforcement and review it from time to time. (Maybe you mean - To make sure you are following your bedroom routine, write down the time you go to bed each night and review it from time to time.) 5. Tell your family that you are following some healthy advice and make them(or - ask them to) supervise you. 6. Ask yourself why you don't follow the health advice when you give up on it.
I will do what you say! :-)
February 18, 2021
Written Exercise 45 - Health Advice We Should Take To Heart As we know, often staying up late and drinking can chronically damage our liver. Liver damage is irreversible and can lead to death. For protecting our liver and saving our lives, here is some health advice we should follow. 1. Try to drink less, and if at all possible,quit drinking. 2. Go to bed earlier than you are accustomed to. 3. Make reasonable daily plans and a bedtime routine. 4. To execute the bedtime routine you make, “mark down the result of enforcement”(do you mean “keep track of how well you are following it”?) and review it from time to time. 5. Tell your family that you are following some health advice guidelines and ask them to supervise you. 6. When you want to give up, remind yourself why you follow the health advice. Corrected by Rob
Thanks Rob!
February 19, 2021
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