Hello! My name is Martin, and I'm 31 years old. I lived in Yangzhou of Jiangsu province until I graduated from the high school, then I moved to Nanjing for my college studies in NJUST. After I had finished my master's degree, I started working at ZTE in 2016. For the first three and half years, I worked as a test manager in charge of the Cloud Campus solution and some significant test and delivery projects such as one for the famous supermarket in West Europe--- Lidl. This work experience helped me become familiar with the IPD process. I am a man who is energetic and diligent. In my spare time I like reading and exercising. I go to the gym twice or three times a week. Someone once said that, "Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body. When we are healthy, we are wealthy." I believe it! Warm greetings, Martin! Congratulations on a job well done! Most of the corrections and recommendations here are self-explanatory in nature. Avoid the use of run-on sentences, ideas which have been separated with commas instead of using a full-stop, or if not joining the ideas with a conjunction. Other mistakes could have been avoided by being more careful and checking your work before finishing, such one past simple mistake I spotted, and other details such as the lack of a space after a punctuation mark. There was also a spelling mistake. Have you got the English dictionary installed on your browser so you can make use of the built-in spellchecker? If not, do so, because these are tools which are useful for catching mistakes you might miss yourself! If you have any further questions, give me a shout! From me to you, it's light and peace! ☝🏽🙏🏽🤲🏽🔥🌞🕊️🌈🌠