Kheira Omer
I'd be so thankful if anyone corrects this paragraph. When I was a kid, I was so obsessed to watching TV and drama. I used to think this is the real life. I thought that if i'll have any kind of relationships should be like those on tv or not. I had a lot of dreams and plans for my future and my relationships. But by the time, I start see that I have no real life. I'm not loyal to my friends because I'm all the time looking for the best friend. I started asking " why" . By reading books i discover that i was living in imaginary life. I stop watching tv because it filled my mind with fake love, fake friends, and fake lifestyle. Now I'm so happy because i find myself and i Know what my future should be.
Sep 29, 2021 9:20 AM
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I'd be so thankful if anyone corrects this paragraph. When I was a kid, I was so obsessed to watching TV and drama. I used to think this is the real life. I thought that if i'll have any kind of relationships should be like those on tv or not. I had a lot of dreams and plans for my future and my relationships. But by the time, I start see that I have no real life. I'm not loyal to my friends because I'm all the time looking for the best friend. I started asking " why" . By reading books i discover that i was living in imaginary life. I stop watching tv because it filled my mind with fake love, fake friends, and fake lifestyle. Now I'm so happy because i find myself and i Know what my future should be.
..obsessed with. it was real life. ill (always write I with a capital letter even if in the middle of a sentence. ... by the time I realized my relationship with my friends was broken. reading books enlightened me because I the life i was living was not genuine. I stopped watching television .... I am now happy that I rediscovered myself and know the future or life I deserve.
Sep 29, 2021 10:03 AM
I'll be so thankful if anyone corrects this paragraph. When I was a kid, I was so obsessed with watching TV and drama. I used to think that it was real life. I thought that if i'll have any kind of relationship, it should be like those on tv or no relationship at all. I had a lot of dreams and plans for my future and my relationships. But by the time, I realised that I am not living a real life and I'm not loyal to my friends, because I'm always looking for the best friend. I asked myself, " why?" . By reading books, I discovered that i was living an imaginary life. I stopped watching TV because it filled my mind with fake love, fake friends, and fake lifestyle. Now, I'm so happy because I found myself and I know what my future should be.
Sep 29, 2021 9:49 AM
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Kheira Omer
Language Skills
Arabic, English
Learning Language
English