Iamsad
Please correct me if i have a wrong grammar Feel free to add some words or sentences “She believed she could so she did" -R.S.Grey Living for about 5 years in Manila was a roller coster ride. Leaving home for the first time in my life,not seeing people that I’m used to seeing everyday and adjusting to a different kind of lifestyle. It is a make it or break it moment in life. I learned to be independent, I failed subjects and there was a time when I wanted to quit, I wanted to give up but I'm surrounded by people who've always believed in me. I wish I could share my success to all of you Thank you everyone who has been a part of this journey. To my parents, who support me physically and financially. To my uni friends who have been there even though we are not in the same class - you guys made my college days amazing. And of course above everything else to you oh Lord, thank you for being my strength and allowing me to cry out to you in my times of need. “
Oct 3, 2021 5:43 PM
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Please correct me if i have a wrong grammar Feel free to add some words or sentences “She believed she could so she did" -R.S.Grey Living for about 5 years in Manila was a roller coaster ride. Leaving home for the first time in my life,not seeing people that I’m used to seeing everyday and adjusting to a different kind of lifestyle was a big adjustment. It is a make it or break it moment in my life. I learned to be independent, I failed subjects and there was a time when I wanted to quit, I wanted to give up but I'm surrounded by people who've always believed in me. I wish I could share my success with all of you Thank you everyone who has been a part of this journey. To my parents, who support me physically and financially. To my uni friends who have been there even though we are not in the same class - you guys made my college days amazing. And of course above everything else to you oh Lord, thank you for being my strength and allowing me to cry out to you in my times of need. “ This is very touching and very well written. I loved reading and editing it for you. I hope my corrections helped.
Oct 3, 2021 5:49 PM
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Iamsad
Language Skills
English, Filipino (Tagalog)
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English