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Writing Exercise 306 – DESCRIBING A MOVIE This afternoon, I watched one of the series movies called Fei-hung Huang, acted by Jet Li. The movie story happened in the Qing dynasty in Guangzhou and was about how Fei-hung Huang, a Kungfu Master, defeating corrupt mandarins and saving the life of a British ambassador who sold fake medicine to Chinese for profit and the lives of women who were being sold to Southeast Asia. A group of fake monks took a temple as a screen. They kidnapped the female believers who were worshiping at the temple, then passed them to the corrupt mandarins, who did the human trafficking business. However, one of the mandarins was cunning and knew that Master Huang was righteous and that Huang would mess up his dirty business. So he expelled Huang from the city for one reason or another. Fortunately, not only did Huang find his business but also knew the trick that the mandarin was going to kill the British ambassador in a show. Finally, Master Huang defeated the bad men with his excellent kungfu and saved the lives of the people.
Oct 5, 2021 10:58 AM
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Writing Exercise 306 – DESCRIBING A MOVIE This afternoon, I watched one of the movie series called Fei-hung Huang, starring Jet Li. The story is set during the Qing dynasty in Guangzhou and was about how Fei-hung Huang, a Kungfu Master, defeated corrupt mandarins and saved the life of a British ambassador who sold fake medicine to Chinese for profit and the lives of women who were being sold to Southeast Asia. A group of fake monks took a temple as a screen. They kidnapped the female believers who were worshiping at the temple, then passed them to the corrupt mandarins, who did the human trafficking business. However, one of the mandarins was cunning and knew that Master Huang was righteous and that Huang would mess up his dirty business. So he expelled Huang from the city for one reason or another. Fortunately, not only did Huang find his business but also learned of the scheme of the mandarin who was going to kill the British ambassador during a show. Finally, Master Huang defeated the bad men with his excellent kungfu and saved the lives of the people.
Bravo Huang the Brave! :)
November 12, 2021
Writing Exercise 306 – DESCRIBING A MOVIE This afternoon, I watched one of the series movies called Fei-hung Huang, starring Jet Li / in which Jet Lin acted. The movie’s story happened in/during the Qing dynasty in Guangzhou and was about how Fei-hung Huang, a Kungfu Master, defeated corrupt Chinese and saved the life of a British ambassador who sold fake medicine to the Chinese for profit and the lives of women who were being sold to Southeast Asia. A group of fake monks took a temple ???as a screen.??? They kidnapped the female believers who were worshiping at the temple, then passed them to the corrupt Chinese (I’m not sure what you mean by mandarin, I think mandarin is a kind of orange), who did the human trafficking business. However, one of the ____ was cunning and knew that Master Huang was righteous and that Huang would mess up his dirty business. So he expelled Huang from the city for an unrelated reason. Fortunately, not only did Huang find his business, but he also knew the scheme that the ____ was going to kill the British ambassador during a show. Finally, Master Huang defeated the bad men with his excellent kungfu and saved the lives of the people.
October 5, 2021
Writing Exercise 306 – DESCRIBING A MOVIE This afternoon, I watched one of the series movies called Fei-hung Huang, starring Jet Li. The movie's plot took place in the Qing dynasty in Guangzhou and was about how Fei-hung Huang, a Kungfu Master, who defeated corrupt mandarins and saved the life of a British ambassador who sold fake medicine to Chinese for profit, as well as the lives of women who were being sold to Southeast Asia. A group of fake monks took a temple as a smoke screen. They kidnapped the female believers who were worshiping at the temple, then passed them to the corrupt mandarins, who conducted the human trafficking business. However, one of the mandarins was cunning and knew that Master Huang, who was a righteous man, would mess up his dirty business. The mandarin expelled Huang from the city for one reason or another. Fortunately, not only did Huang find his business, but he also knew the trick that the mandarin was going to use to kill the British ambassador in a show. Finally, Master Huang defeated the bad men with his excellent kungfu and saved the lives of the people.
I used replaced "screen" with "smoke screen" because I assumed that you meant that the fake monks were using the temple to pretend that they were legitimate.
October 5, 2021
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