Michelle Lee
Our government has set up an official initiative to build a metaverse with a clear mission to create a society where people can prosper without interference of physical and/or neural limitations. How crazy and scary is that.
Feb 2, 2022 8:59 AM
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Our government has set up an official initiative to build a metaverse with a clear mission to create a society where people can prosper without the interference of physical and/or neural limitations. How crazy and scary is that?
Hi there. This is very well written. I have only made two changes. Hope this helps ☺️
Feb 2, 2022 9:08 AM
Our government has set up an official initiative to build a metaverse with a clear mission to create a society where people can prosper without the interference of physical and/or neural limitations. How crazy and scary is that?
As far as grammar goes, I only made two minor changes. However, I honestly didn't understand what you are trying to get across. First of all, what to you mean by "metaverse"? Secondly, when you say "without the interference of physical and/or neural limitations", what do you mean? What would be some examples of neural limits?
Feb 2, 2022 12:38 PM
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