Glaly🥰Joysi
Could anybody correct the article for me? Thank you. My Hero Everybody has a hero in his/her heart. My hero is my teacher. She always works hard and tries to teach us better. She never gives up to help us be better. She is kind and nice. She always takes care of everyone in class and she doesn't hate any of us. She loves us all and we all like her very much. She is my hero in my heart.
Feb 3, 2022 10:02 AM
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Could anybody correct the article for me? Thank you. My Hero Everybody has a hero in his/her heart. My hero is my teacher. She always works hard and tries to teach us better. She never gives up in order to help us be better. She is kind and nice. She always takes care of everyone in class and she doesn't hate any of us. She loves us all and we all like her very much. She is a hero in my heart./She is a hero in my eyes.
Nice writing! It sounds like you have a wonderful teacher.
Feb 4, 2022 1:29 AM
My Hero Everybody has a hero in his/her heart. My hero is my teacher. She always does her best to ensure we’re getting the finest education. She never gives up and is constantly helping us be better. She is kind and nice. She loves all of her students and shows it with her actions every day. She looks out for them and takes care of them. That is why she is my hero.
🙋🏾‍♀️Hi, I just wanted to say that your start is good but the over all work could be better. Try to broaden your vocabulary a little bit next time. It might help if you, first draft what you want to say. Then try to reformat it. You can look up synonyms if your having a hard time. It was great just a little redundant. 😁😁
Feb 4, 2022 1:15 AM
Could anybody correct the article for me? Thank you. My Hero Everybody has a hero in his/her heart. My hero is my teacher. She always works hard and tries to teach us better. She never gives up trying to help us be better. She is kind and nice. She always takes care of everyone in class and she doesn't hate any of us. She loves us all and we all like her very much. She is my hero in my heart.
Great!
Feb 3, 2022 1:51 PM
Could anybody correct the article for me? Thank you. My Hero Everybody has a hero in his/her heart. My hero is my teacher. She always works hard and tries to teach us better. She never gives up to help us be better. She is kind and nice. She always takes care of everyone in class and she doesn't hate any of us. She loves us all and we all like her very much. She is my hero in my heart.
Great work Glaly! I do not see any error in this! Nice!
Feb 3, 2022 10:21 AM
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