Roshan 786
This weekend is very busy for me. I try to complete some pending works related to my home. One is to build a car shed in front of my house, also I try to concrete the passage from the house to road. My friend Ravi and alwin help to complete the work. After I gave party for my friends
Feb 5, 2022 10:39 AM
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This weekend is going to be very busy for me. I'm going to try to complete some unfinished building work/ decorating at home. One is to build a garage in front of the house, also I'm going to try to concrete the passage from the house to the road. My friends, Ravi and Alwin, are going to help me complete the work. After I we'll celebrate together.
Brilliant! I've just made a few improvements to the wording, including changing the tense from present simple into future using 'going to...'. Hope that helps!
Feb 5, 2022 11:03 AM
This weekend is going to be very busy for me. I try to complete some pending works related to my home. One is to build a car shed in front of my house, also I try to concrete the passage from the house to the road. My friend Ravi and Alwin help to complete the work. After I gave a party for my friends
Good job Roshan. I hope you have a good weekend.
Feb 5, 2022 11:47 AM
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