Djo
As for me weekend is the only chance to take a rest and clear my mind. Nowdays , life become complicated we all have a lot of committment to respect in school university , work and even in home. Therefore , finding spare time for ourselves is really hard. I knew people who even work in the weekend ,and that 's totally inacceptable. We need to strike a balance between professional and personal life , Health is above all , weekend should be mainly allocated to having fun , taking some fresh air ,and seeing family.
Feb 8, 2022 12:49 PM
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For me, weekends are the only chance to rest and clear my mind. Nowadays, life is complicated and we all have lots of commitments in school, university, work, and even at home. Therefore, finding spare time is really hard. I knew people who even work on weekends, and that's totally unacceptable. We need to strike a balance between professional and personal life, being healthy above all. Weekends should be mainly allocated to having fun, getting some fresh air, and seeing family.
Very good job, Djo. Just some minor grammar mistakes, but your ideas are coming across well!
Feb 9, 2022 3:30 PM
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