Is it a good introduction of a Five paragraph essay ?
Have you ever feel you have a complete life, and you have a wonderful lifestyle.However, someone suddenly come in your life and change everything ? summer in 2018 I was in France .I met someone his name is Joy and he was just like his name . The first meeting was in Shakespeare library when we talked about Feminism , and how has affect in our life and how is importent. Actually , he did not say any thing new about them for me .However, I was impressed how he does live with this concept as something important I never saw someone thinking like hem . This Conversation it was the best thing happened in my vacation
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