Well done :), a few tweaks: Try to use ‘coronavirus pandemic’ not the coronovirus. As the latter is just a virus. Of course, in every day talk people might call it that way, corona, covid but in writing you should refer to the situation as the pandemic or lockdown ( restrictions by government). You can say we are more stressed but the life is more stressful. We can visit our families because, I imagine you talk about people in general. ‘Fortunately, I can get used to’ I was not clear what you tried to say, so I changed the order to have bit more clarity. I didn’t understand what you meant by : we can go outside because it is safe. Because there are no robbers etc? Or because you will not catch the virus? Or because the government allows you- in this case you would say- it is still safe to go outside. Also when you list some upsides of the situation but end by saying you want the pandemic to end, you need some conjunction eg. ‘However’ . Otherwise, it would not read well.