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George
It is snowing today. It's a bit heavy and the first snow of this year. Terrific! Heavy and sufficient snow means a good harvest of the coming year for most crops and peasants. It makes me think of the people in the starving and bad nutrition. Though most people have escaped from starvation in most countries and areas of the world, still numbers of people deeped into the muddy of starvation and poor. It is reported by WHO there are about eight zero point eight billion people who are in the situation of starving and bad nutrition in the world nowadays. especially Africa. So we should precious stain and food, no matter it's rice or meat, also tough staple or fine staple, and please don't waste it. Keep a mouth to others who are starving.
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Nov 22, 2020 7:53 AM
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It is snowing today. It's a bit heavy and the first snow of this year. Terrific! Heavy and sufficient snow means a good harvest for the coming year for most crops. It makes me think of the people who are starving and have bad nutrition. Though most people have escaped from starvation in most countries and areas of the world, there is still a large number of people deeped in the muddy of starvation and poverty. It is reported by WHO there are about eight zero point eight billion people who are starving and have bad nutrition in the world nowadays, mostly in Africa. So we should treat food preciously, no matter whether it's rice or meat. Please don't waste it. Have a thought for others who are starving.
7 days ago
It is snowing today. It's a bit heavy and the first snow of this year*. Terrific! Heavy and sufficient snow means a good harvest of the coming year for most crops and peasants*. It makes me think of the people who are starving and malnourished. Though most people have escaped from starvation in most countries and areas of the world, so many people are still stuck in the mud of starvation and poverty (this is sort of an odd-sounding metaphor to me- I made it a bit better, but still a bit odd to read, for me at least. Perhaps others disagree.) It is reported by WHO that nowadays there are about 80.8 (this number would never be written out. Usually like: 80.8 billion so that the decimal isn’t written out but you don’t have to use so many zeros) billion people who are in the situation of starvation and malnourishment in the world, especially in Africa. So we should hold food dear, no matter whether it's rice or meat, tough staple or fine staple (tough and fine staples are not concepts I am familiar with, I don’t think they translate well to English this way). Please don’t waste food. (if you start the sentence in the indicative mood I don’t think you should switch to imperative until after the sentence is over). Keep a mouth to others who are starving. (This isn’t a phrase I’m familiar with. Maybe say, consider those who are starving as you eat what you’re fortunate enough to have)
7 days ago
It is snowing today. It's a bit heavy, and it’s the first snow this year (note 1). Terrific! Heavy and sufficient snow means a good harvest the coming year for most crops and peasants. It makes me think of the people who are starving and have bad nutrition. Though most people have escaped starvation in most countries and areas of the world, there are still numbers of people who are deep in starvation and poverty(note2). It is reported by the WHO that there are about eighty point eight billion people who are starving and have bad nutrition in the world nowadays, especially in Africa. So we should treat our food as something precious, no matter if it's rice or meat, whether it’s a tough staple or a fine staple, and please don't waste it. Keep a mouth to others who are starving. (I don’t understand this last sentence)
7 days ago
George
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Chinese (Mandarin), English, Persian (Farsi)
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