Olga Sapozhnikova
Would you correct this text for me, please? 365 days of writing prompts February 27 Comedy of errors. Murphy's Law says, 'Anything that can go wrong will go wrong'. Write about a time everything did - fiction encouraged here, too. It's always happens on work when a new client send argent purchase order. All mistakes which could happen have happened. The supplier has sent a defective tools, production has done some wrong, and of course supplier has delivered products to wrong address. I've seen this happen a lot of times and when now I've received a super argent purchase order I said 'No, you can't receive it within two days, you can receive it within two weeks only'. #365daysofwriting #365daysofwritingprompts
Feb 28, 2021 6:40 PM
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Would you correct this text for me, please? 365 days of writing prompts February 27 Comedy of errors. Murphy's Law says, 'Anything that can go wrong will go wrong'. Write about a time everything did - fiction encouraged here, too. It always happens at work when a new client sends an urgent purchase order. All mistakes which could happen do (happen). The supplier sends defective tools, production does something wrong, and of course the supplier delivers (the) products to the wrong address. I've seen this happen a lot of times and now when I receive a super urgent purchase order I say 'No, you can't receive it within two days, you can receive it within two weeks only'. #365daysofwriting #365daysofwritingprompts
I think “All mistakes... wrong address” sounds better in the present tense because this is something which still happens now rather than something which happened only in the past. 🙂
Feb 28, 2021 10:22 PM
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Olga Sapozhnikova
Language Skills
English, Italian, Russian
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English