Would you correct this text for me, please?
365 days of writing prompts
The Clock [capitalize words in titles]
Write about anything you'd like. Somewhere in your post, include the sentence, 'I heard the car door slam, and immediately looked at the clock'.
I complained about this task to a friend ["my friend" implies that you have already introduced your friend as "a friend" or "one of my friends"] and she told me a story that happened [completed action in the past] in a composition/writing competition. The students were given the task to write a text which had to [had to - obligation in the past] mention God ["a god" means one of many gods, but some cultures only recognize one god (God, Yahwey, Allah, ... depending on the religion)], a queen, sex, and a secret. A clever student wrote: 'Oh, God!' exclaimed the Queen. 'I'm pregnant and don't know who the father is!' [embedded statements use statement order not question order]
My literature talent is less than that of this unknown student, so I have just repeated this story for you.