Jesús Álvarez
My name is Jesús. I'm from Spain and I am going to talk about my family. My mother is from Madrid and my dad is from Toledo. When they got married, they decided live in Toledo. I have three sisters and five nephews. All of them are boys 👦🏽. I am the youngest brother. I really enjoy when we are together in my home. It's fantastic spend time with them. My grandmother lives in Madrid. She is 91 years old, but she can do everything without help. I think that my granny is the best cook of the world. She loves cook and when I go to visit her, she prepare a lot of food and sweets. I love my family. I wish next Christmas we will be together.
Oct 21, 2020 5:40 AM
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My name is Jesús. I'm from Spain and I am going to talk about my family. My mother is from Madrid and my dad is from Toledo. When they got married, they decided to live in Toledo. I have three sisters and five nephews. I am the youngest brother. I really enjoy when we are together at home. It's fantastic to spend time with them. My grandmother lives in Madrid. She is 91 years old, but she can do everything without any help. I think that my granny is the best cook in the world. She loves to cook and when I visit her, she prepares lots of food and sweets. I love my family. I wish for us to be together next Christmas.
Good work man! It was really good but I removed the part where you wrote 'all of them are boys' because people will know they are boys when you say that they are your nephews. I made some other corrections too.
October 21, 2020
My name is Jesús. I'm from Spain and I am going to talk about my family. My mother is from Madrid and my dad is from Toledo. When they got married, they decided to live in Toledo. I have three sisters and five nephews. All of them are boys 👦🏽. I am the youngest brother. I really enjoy it when we are together in my home. It's fantastic to spend time with them. My grandmother lives in Madrid. She is 91 years old, but she can do everything without help. I think that my granny is the best cook in the world. She loves to cook and when I go to visit her, she prepares a lot of food and sweets. I love my family. I wish next Christmas we will be together.
October 21, 2020
My name is Jesús. I'm from Spain and I am going to talk about my family. My mother is from Madrid and my dad is from Toledo. When they got married, they decided live in Toledo. I have three sisters and five nephews. All of them are boys 👦🏽. I am the youngest brother. I really enjoy when we are together in my home. It's fantastic to spend time with them. My grandmother lives in Madrid. She is 91 years old, but she can do everything without help. I think that my granny is the best cook in the world. She loves to cook and whenever I visit her, she prepares a lot of food and sweets. I love my family. I hope, next Christmas we will be together.
October 21, 2020
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