Allison
Due to a burgeoning population, the demand for food is increasing dramatically these days. In recent years, the problem of food security has become prominent.. Food engineering is a viable strategy to tackle the problem of food shortage. However, food engineering still has drawbacks. This essay will discuss the benefits and risks of genetically engineered food. It will focus on the advantages of gene technology on alleviating food scarcity and improving the nutrition of food, as well as its threats such as damaging the environment and people’s health.
Oct 21, 2020 6:43 AM
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Due to a burgeoning population, the demand for food is increasing dramatically these days. In recent years, the problem of food security has become prominent. Food engineering is a viable strategy to tackle the problem of food shortages. However, food engineering still has drawbacks. This essay will discuss the benefits and risks of genetically engineered food. It will focus on the advantages of gene technology on alleviating food scarcity and improving the nutritional value of food, as well as its threats such as damaging the environment and people’s health.
Wow, I have seen poorer writing in correcting native university students! You clearly have a strong grasp of English, and you clearly articulate yourself well. I've added two very small corrections. These are not necessarily grammatical improvements, but I've used expressions that are commonly used. E.g. the 'nutritional value of food' is more descriptive and scientific than 'nutrition of food'. I hope that this helps! ✌
October 21, 2020
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Allison
Language Skills
English, Japanese
Learning Language
English