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我每天早上7或8点起床。我喝咖啡和吃香蕉。我上班。我每天太忙了!学中文很难。
Oct 21, 2020 2:20 PM
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我每天早上7、8点起床。我早餐喝咖啡,吃香蕉,然后上班。我每天太忙了!学中文很难。
October 22, 2020
我每天早上7或8点起床。我喝咖啡和吃香蕉。我上班。我每天太忙了!学中文很难。
Generally good I knew that you are trying to apply a simple present tense here. But we don't speak like that although people can fully understand your idea. 我喝咖啡和吃香蕉,我上班。 If there were no context, this sentence will sounds like I am always drinking coffe and eating banana and doing my work. You can just say 我(起床后)会喝咖啡,吃香蕉,然后上班。
October 21, 2020
我每天早上7点或8点起床,然后我喝咖啡还有吃香蕉,接着我去上班。我每天都太忙了!学中文很难。
October 21, 2020
我每天早上7、8点起床,早餐用的是咖啡和香蕉。然后去上班。边上班边学中文,我每天太忙了!学中文太难了。
October 21, 2020
我每天早上7或8点起床。我喝咖啡和吃香蕉。我上班。我每天太忙了!学中文很难。
用词很准确,非常不错。知道咖啡是喝的,香蕉是吃的。对非母语的人来说已经非常不错了!你曾经在中国待过吗?
October 21, 2020
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