🦊The Fox & Crow🐦 Once there was a hungry fox searching for anything to eat.🥞All of sudden it saw a crow with a bun in his beak & sitting on a tree.🌳The crow had taken bun from a bakery shop.�

Rashmi

🦊The Fox & Crow🐦 Once there was a hungry fox searching for anything to eat.🥞All of sudden it saw a crow with a bun in his beak & sitting on a tree.🌳The crow had taken bun from a bakery shop.🥖😋 The fox wanted to take the bun,but the fox can't climb the tree.So he made a clever plan.He said to the crow," Hellow,people tell me that you can sing very well,why don't you sing a song ?" The crow become very proud and opened his mouth to sing.🎤🎶 Oh, poor crow ..His bun fell down.Fox took it & ran away..🦊🦊

Oct 26, 2020 2:48 AM

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🦊The Fox and The Crow🐦 Once, there was a hungry fox searching for anything to eat.🥞All of sudden it saw a crow with a bun in his beak and sitting on a tree.🌳The crow had taken a bun from the bakery shop.🥖😋 The fox wanted to take the bun, but the fox couldn't climb the tree.So, he made a clever plan. He said to the crow," Hello. People tell me that you can sing very well. Why don't you sing a song ?" The crow being very flattered, opened his mouth to sing.🎤🎶 Oh, poor crow ..His bun fell down. The fox took it and ran away..🦊🦊 "The fox took it and ran away."

You have a very good sense of English grammar. I have already made the corrections on your story for you. Re-read it now. I would recommend, however, that you not use the "&" sign. Entitle the story, "The Fox and The Crow". Also, after a period, make one space before writing the next sentence. "Hello" does not have a "w" because the sound you need is in the "o".

October 26, 2020

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