Esther
Could anyone correct my homework, please? Thank you Dear Charlene I just received your letter of complaint and I’m completely desolated because of your discontent. I have gone over the facts Occurred on Last 24th And I believe that you can understand the exceptionally situation we lived in our restaurant in that evening: as we had a possible infection Of Covid among our staff that weekend I Considered that It would be better to replace all of them while they were confined at home. Because of that your reservation was attended not so properly as you deserve. I have to recognise that our habitually staff is more greatly professional than that you were served for. I would have desired everything has been perfect for your birthday party. Fortunately our employees are already safe and ready to resume his job. So give me a second chance and allow me to apologize personally. I would be delighted if you and your friends come to our restaurant to try an appropriate birthday cake made by our chef. I already make a reservation for you in our Special dining room. The desserts and drinks you’ll take will be on my own. wishing you considered my proposal to set a date for a new gathering in our house. Yours faithfully. Esther. Director of Savissimo Restaurant
Oct 26, 2020 1:06 PM
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Could someone correct my homework, please? Thank you. Dear Charlene, I have just received your letter of complaint and I’m sorry to hear about your dissatisfaction. I have gone over the facts that occurred on the 24th. I hope you can understand the difficult situation we had in our restaurant that evening: as we had a possible Covid infection among our staff that weekend, I considered that it would be better to replace all of them while they were confined at home. Because of that, your reservation was not attended as properly as you deserve. I have to recognise that our usual staff are much more professional than those that you were served by. I would have desired that everything had been perfect for your birthday party. Fortunately, our employees are now safe and ready to resume their jobs. So give me a second chance and allow me to apologize personally. I would be delighted if you and your friends could come to our restaurant to try an appropriate birthday cake made by our chef. I have already made a reservation for you in our Special dining room. Any desserts and drinks you have will be on the house. Hoping you consider my proposal to set a date for a new gathering in our establishment. Yours faithfully, Esther. Director Savissimo Restaurant Someone - alguien. Anyone - cualquier persona. I have just - acabo de Sólo decimos la fecha, sin last o past. Exceptional es más como impresionante y exceptionally es un adverbio y aquí tiene que ser un adjetivo. By - por Now - ahora (entiendo que quieres decir "ya", pero already no es correcto en ese contexto.) I have already made, eso sí, ya. El tiempo perfecto, porque es una acción completa. Take - llevar. Have es el equivalente de tomar. On the house - a invitación de la casa. Sigue practicando. Saludos desde Córdoba. Simón.
October 26, 2020
Could anyone correct my homework, please? Thank you Dear Charlene I just received your letter of complaint and I’m completely desolated because of your discontent. I have gone over the facts Occurred on Last 24th And I believe that you can understand the exceptionally situation we lived in our restaurant in that evening: as we had a possible infection Of Covid among our staff that weekend I Considered that It would be better to replace all of them while they were confined at home. Because of that your reservation was attended not so properly as you deserve. I have to recognise that our habitually staff is more greatly professional than that you were served for. I would have desired everything has been perfect for your birthday party. Fortunately our employees are already safe and ready to resume his job. So give me a second chance and allow me to apologize personally. I would be delighted if you and your friends come to our restaurant to try an appropriate birthday cake made by our chef. I already make a reservation for you in our Special dining room. The desserts and drinks you’ll take will be on my own. wishing you considered my proposal to set a date for a new gathering in our house. Yours faithfully. Esther. Director of Savissimo Restaurant
October 26, 2020
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Esther
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English, French, Spanish
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English, French