sania
It happened one year ago. At 1 pm, suddenly we were instructed to gather in the middle of the field and we had lunch there. It was very surprising, because usually we eat in the dining room. After that, we were given a list of items to bring. When we got out, there were 6 trucks ready to take us. The trip lasted 6 hours. Even though we passed the toll road and were escorted by the police, we didn't stop at all for 6 hours. Along the way, I didn't stop wondering where I was going. We got there at 6 pm, it was already dark. I heard the sound of the waves, I can be sure I was around the beach, but I don't know exactly where I was. It lasted for 3 days 2 nights, on the first day we did all the activities in group for 4 persons. Later in the evening, we did a test to find a way out and explore on our own in the middle of the forest. The activity was closed on the third day after the dawn call to prayer. Actually, I did a lot during those 3 memorable days, but I can't tell you about it here. Those 3 days were the days when I was the bravest, most sincere, most emotional, and strongest person in 18 years of my life🌞🙏
Oct 27, 2020 4:38 AM
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It happened one year ago. At 1 pm, suddenly we were instructed to gather in the middle of the field and we had lunch there. It was very surprising, because usually we eat in the dining room. After that, we were given a list of items to bring. When we got out, there were 6 trucks ready to take us. The trip lasted 6 hours. Even though we passed the toll road and were escorted by the police, we didn't stop at all for 6 hours. Along the way, I didn't stop wondering where I was going. We got there at 6 pm, it was already dark. I heard the sound of the waves, I can be sure I was around the beach, but I don't know exactly where I was. It lasted for 3 days 2 nights, on the first day we did all the activities in groups for 4 persons. Later in the evening, we did a test to find a way out and explore on our own in the middle of the forest. The activity was closed on the third day after the dawn call to prayer. Actually, I did a lot during those 3 memorable days, but I can't tell you about it here. Those 3 days were the days when I was the bravest, most sincere, most emotional, and strongest person in 18 years of my life🌞🙏
I really can't make any corrections here! Beautifully written! 😄
October 27, 2020
It happened one year ago. At 1 pm, suddenly we were instructed to gather in the middle of the field and we had lunch there. It was very surprising, because usually we eat in the dining room. After that, we were given a list of items to bring. When we got out, there were 6 trucks ready to take us. The trip lasted 6 hours. Even though we passed the toll road and were escorted by the police, we didn't stop at all for 6 hours. Along the way, I didn't stop wondering where I was going. We got there at 6 pm, it was already dark. I heard the sound of the waves, I can be sure I was around the beach, but I don't know exactly where I was. It lasted for 3 days 2 nights, on the first day we did all the activities in group for 4 persons. Later in the evening, we did a test to find a way out and explore on our own in the middle of the forest. The activity was closed on the third day after the dawn call to prayer. Actually, I did a lot during those 3 memorable days, but I can't tell you about it here. Those 3 days were the days when I was the bravest, most sincere, most emotional, and strongest person in 18 years of my life🌞🙏
October 27, 2020
It happened one year ago. At 1 pm, suddenly we were instructed to gather in the middle of the field and we had lunch there. It was very surprising, because usually we eat in the dining room. After that, we were given a list of items to bring. When we got out, there were 6 trucks ready to take us. The trip lasted 6 hours. Even though we passed the toll road and were escorted by the police, we didn't stop at all for 6 hours. Along the way, I didn't stop wondering where I was going. We got there at 6 pm, it was already dark. I heard the sound of the waves, I can be sure I was around the beach, but I don't know exactly where I was. It lasted for 3 days 2 nights, on the first day we did all the activities in group for 4 persons. Later in the evening, we did a test to find a way out and explore on our own in the middle of the forest. The activity was closed on the third day after the dawn call to prayer. Actually, I did a lot during those 3 memorable days, but I can't tell you about it here. Those 3 days were the days when I was the bravest, most sincere, most emotional, and strongest person in 18 years of my life🌞🙏
Buen trabajo 😃😃
October 28, 2020
It happened one year ago. At 1 pm, suddenly we were instructed to gather in the middle of the field and we had lunch there. It was very surprising, because usually we eat in the dining room. After that, we were given a list of items to bring. When we got out, there were 6 trucks ready to take us. The trip lasted 6 hours. Even though we passed the toll road and were escorted by the police, we didn't stop at all for 6 hours. Along the way, I didn't stop wondering where I was going. We got there at 6 pm, it was already dark. I heard the sound of the waves, I can be sure I was around the beach, but I don't know exactly where I was. It lasted for 3 days 2 nights, on the first day we did all the activities in group for 4 persons. Later in the evening, we did a test to find a way out and explore on our own in the middle of the forest. The activity was closed on the third day after the dawn call to prayer. Actually, I did a lot during those 3 memorable days, but I can't tell you about it here. Those 3 days were the days when I felt I was the bravest, most sincere, most emotional, and strongest person in 18 years of my life🌞🙏
This was really well written. I am glad you had an incredible experience like that. Good paragraph. I cannot wait to read more from you.
October 27, 2020
It happened one year ago. At 1 pm, suddenly we were instructed to gather in the middle of the field and we had lunch there. It was very surprising, because usually we eat in the dining room. After that, we were given a list of items to bring. When we got out, there were 6 trucks ready to take us. The trip lasted 6 hours. Even though we passed the toll road and were escorted by the police, we didn't stop at all for 6 hours. Along the way, I didn't stop wondering where I was going. We got there at 6 pm, it was already dark. I heard the sound of the waves, I can be sure I was around the beach, but I don't know exactly where I was. It lasted for 3 days 2 nights, on the first day we did all the activities in group for 4 persons. Later in the evening, we did a test to find a way out and explore on our own in the middle of the forest. The activity was closed on the third day after the dawn call to prayer. Actually, I did a lot during those 3 memorable days, but I can't tell you about it here. Those 3 days were the days when I was the bravest, most sincere, most emotional, and strongest person in 18 years of my life🌞🙏 Sania can we practice English?)
October 27, 2020
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