Ezzat Yaseen
We all fantasize about living a better life. Sometimes we think that a certain day, according to our personal circumstances, will be the start of a happy life. The period between that date and the current moment is perceived as insignificant because it is full of pessimism and frustration. We feel that all days are similar and boring. I think such a thought is a silent killer and might destroy us. We must take advantage of every single moment of our lives as long as we are healthy and still breathing. First, we should learn how to enjoy life. We should learn how to love other people, which is the key to give us a peaceful satisfaction. If we can reach that point of equilibrium, we will be able to feel that our lives are full of meaning, and we will regret the days of our lives lost to pessimism and frustration. Hello I really need the punctuation for the text above besides corrections if needed. Thanks
Feb 24, 2021 10:30 PM
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We all fantasize about living a better life. Sometimes we think that a certain day, according to our personal circumstances, will be the start of a happy life. The period between that date and the current moment is perceived as insignificant because it is full of pessimism and frustration. We feel that all days are similar and boring. I think such a thought is a silent killer and might destroy us. We must take advantage of every single moment of our lives as long as we are healthy and still breathing. First, we should learn how to enjoy life. We should learn how to love other people, which is the key to give us a peaceful satisfaction. If we can reach that point of equilibrium, we will be able to feel that our lives are full of meaning, and we will regret the days of our lives lost to pessimism and frustration. Hello I really need the punctuation for the text above besides corrections if needed. Thanks
No corrections, it looks good! Some of the phrasing and word choice is a bit unusual, but it works with your poetic style.
February 24, 2021
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