Mari Kim
Lily is taken aback to see her grandmother throwing up and going through pain. I think Lily wants to help her, but on the other hand, she is afraid of dealing with her grandmother having a hard time. Grandma notices Lily's mind and tries to reassure Lily. I empathized a lot while reading this part. When my mother was very sick, I was so worried, but I wanted to avoid the situation. It seems very difficult to watch family members or close people get sick. Grandmother tells Lily a story about what she stole from tigers. It is said that when grandmother was young, she heard sad stories about Korean history from her grandmother, and every time she heard such a story, she felt sad and small. So, she decided to steal the stars that have bad stories. She sneaked into the cave where tigers lived and stole the stars and locked them away. She says tigers coming to take it back from her. Could you please make my draft sound more natural? Thank you for your time and help.
Feb 20, 2022 3:05 AM