Fanny Sue Wolke
Hey, can you please check this text? I can check German exercises in exchange. The numbers don‘t have to be correct, I just wanted to practise my writing skills :) Crazy weather in Germany As if the Corona pandemic would not bring enough crazy changes into our lifes, now also the weather is breaking records in fluctuating. Actually the weather here in Germany was already in winter 2020/21 quite surprising, but in a positive way. The last few years we had due to Climate change very mild winters with almost no snow. This time we got the first snow on the first of December. In total we had more snow this year than in the last four years together. But that is not the crazy think. That happend in Febuary 2021. In the third week of Feb vary the temperatures fell down to 20°C below zero. We had the coldest days and night in about to years. That was crazy but the weather really planned to write history. In the fourth week of Fubuary, just one week later we had temperatures up to 20k. 20°C above zero. A village called "Monheim" in Baden-Württemberg measured on the 14/02/2021 a temperature of -23,9°C. On the 23/02/2021,nine days later, the temperature was 21,1°C. That is the biggest change in temperature since people in Germany started to monitor the weather. I think that climate Change and the decrease in C02- Emissions due to Covid-19 caused this fluctuation.
Feb 27, 2021 3:59 PM
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Hey, can you please check this text? I can check German exercises in exchange. The numbers don‘t have to be correct, I just wanted to practice my writing skills :) Crazy weather in Germany. As if the Corona pandemic would not bring enough crazy changes into our lives, now the weather is also breaking records in fluctuation. Actually, Germany had a quite surprising winter, in a positive way. The last few years, we had mild winters with almost no snow. Although, this year it snowed on December first. In total, we had more snow this year than in the last four years together. But the crazy thing happened in February of 2021. In the third week, the temperature fell down to 20°C below zero. We have had the coldest days in years, that was crazy. In the fourth week of February, just one week after the freezing days, we had temperatures up to 20°C. A village called "Monheim" in Baden-Württemberg measured on 14/02/2021 a temperature of -23,9°C. On 23/02/2021, nine days later, the temperature was 21,1°C. That is the biggest temperature change since people in Germany started to monitoring the weather. I think that the climate change and the decrease in CO² emissions due to Covid-19 was the cause of this fluctuation.
Some parts of your text was a bit difficult to understand, so I hope that I didn't change the meaning a lot. And by the way, it must be incredible to go through this freezing experience. Maybe in the future I visit Germany in the winter. If you need help with English, you can text me anytime. I'm still learning it, but I think I can contribute a lot. See yah.
Feb 28, 2021 6:43 AM
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Fanny Sue Wolke
Language Skills
English, German, Korean, Latin
Learning Language
English