Although I will never understand why people enjoy watching football 😝, I did understand everything you wrote and had fun reading it too. You clearly have a strong command of English, especially colloquial English and football jargon. I rearranged the sentence where you first mention Leicester City, because you changed the object halfway through, from the sport of football to the team of Leicester. I also feel like it's worth clarifying who "they" are when you mention the nickname, just because there are two objects in the previous sentence. Has the East Midland vs. Everton match happened yet? It seemed like it hasnt happened yet, from context. If so, you can say that they "are faced against" or "will face against". Finally, this is an issue of style, but in all types of writing aside from really casual text messages, you should spell out numbers less than 11 in full. That means you would write "four houses" and "the ninth candidate", rather than "4 houses" and "the 9th candidate". Great work again. I'll keep my fingers crossed for Leicester!