Maria
Day 96/365 During these days I have some topics about body build, hair type and etc. So , let's I try to introduce myself in these way today. I'm 171 centimeters tall. I'm slim and slender. However my mother told me that I'm thin 😂.I think every mom says these things to your children. (There are)all my relatives have a good body build. Nobody has overweight. I have long legs. My fingers are long too. It's very convenient, because I play the piano.😅 I have fair skin and my face is a fair complexion too. I have long wavy fair hair. I'm going to cut it in a few months. I want to have medium length . When I was a teenager I had red( ginger) hair. It was funny...my mom did it with me 🥴🙈. My mom has shoulder length wavy red hair. She is average weight now, but she still have a thin waist. My granny has a short streight grey hair. She is thin too. My husband isn't thin but he's not thick. He is average weight. Now he's a bald. He shaved his head three - four times a week.
Apr 6, 2021 2:20 PM
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Day 96/365 During this time (or just “recently”) I have (have what...”been interested in”)some topics about body type, hair type and so on. So, let's try to introduce myself in this way today. I'm 171 centimeters tall. I'm slim and slender, however, my mother told me that I'm thin 😂.I think every mom says these things to their children. All my relatives have a good body. Nobody is overweight. I have long legs. My fingers are long too. It's very convenient, because I play the piano.😅 I have fair skin and my face has a fair complexion too. I have long wavy fair hair. I'm going to cut it in a few months. I want to have medium length . When I was a teenager I had red( ginger) hair. It was funny...my mom did it with me 🥴🙈. My mom has shoulder length wavy red hair. She is average weight now, but she still has a thin waist. My granny has short straight grey hair (otherwise you’re talking about a single hair!). She is thin too. My husband isn't thin but he's not fat (or “big” - thick normally implies stupid). He is average weight. Now he's bald. He shaves his head three - four times a week.
Great work. Only a few small errors. It’s impressive that you can write in such a conversational style. Keep at it!
April 6, 2021
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